34 Writing Tips That Will Make You a Better Writer

By Daniel Scocco

writingtipstobecomeabetterwriter.jpgA couple of weeks ago we asked our readers to share their writing tips. The response was far beyond the initial expectations, and the quality of the tips included was amazing. Thanks for everyone who contributed.

Now, without further delay, the 34 writing tips that will make you a better writer!

1. Daniel
Pay attention to punctuation, especially to the correct use of commas and periods. These two punctuation marks regulate the flow of your thoughts, and they can make your text confusing even if the words are clear.

2. Thomas
Participate in NaNoWriMo, which challenges you to write a 50,000 word novel in a month. I noticed that my writing has definitely improved over the course of the book — and it’s not even finished yet.

3. Bill Harper
Try not to edit while you’re creating your first draft. Creating and editing are two separate processes using different sides of the brain, and if you try doing both at once you’ll lose. Make a deal with your internal editor that it will get the chance to rip your piece to shreds; it will just need to wait some time.

A really nice trick is to switch off your monitor when you’re typing. You can’t edit what you can’t see.

4. Jacinta
In a sentence: write daily for 30 minutes minimum! It’s easy to notice the difference in a short time. Suddenly, ideas come to you and you think of other things to write. You experiment with styles and voices and words and the language becomes more familiar…

5. Ane Mulligan
Learn the rules of good writing… then learn when and how to break them.

6. Pete Bollini
I sometimes write out 8 to 10 pages from the book of my favorite writer… in longhand. This helps me to get started and swing into the style I wish to write in.

7. Nilima Bhadbhade
Be a good reader first.

8. Douglas Davis
While spell-checking programs serve as a good tool, they should not be relied
upon to detect all mistakes. Regardless of the length of the article, always read and review what you have written.

9. Kukusha
Learn to take criticism and seek it out at every opportunity. Don’t get upset even if you think the criticism is harsh, don’t be offended even if you think it’s wrong, and always thank those who take the time to offer it.

10. John England
Right click on a word to use the thesaurus. Do it again on the new word and make the best use of your vocabulary.

11. Lillie Ammann
After editing the work on screen or in print, I like to read the text aloud. Awkward sentences and errors that slipped through earlier edits show up readily when reading out loud.

12. H Devaraja Rao
Avoid wordiness. Professor Strunk put it well: “a sentence should contain no unnecessary words, a paragraph no unnecessary sentences, for the same reason that a drawing should have no unnecessary lines and a machine no unnecessary parts.”

13. David
Write as if you’re on deadline and have 500 words to make your point. Then do it again. And again.

14. Yvette
Sometimes I type in a large font to have the words and sentences bold before me.

Sometimes, in the middle of a document I will start a new topic on a fresh sheet to have that clean feeling. Then, I’ll cut and insert it into the larger document.

I wait until my paper is done before I examine my word usage and vocabulary choices. (And reading this column it has reminded me that no two words are ever exactly alike.) So at the end, I take time to examine my choice of words. I have a lot of fun selecting the exact words to pinpoint my thoughts or points.

15. Amit Goyal
To be a good writer is to start writing everyday. As Mark Twain said, “the secret of getting ahead is getting started.”

Try using new words. i.e avoid repeating words. this way we learn the usage of different words.
Do edit your previous articles.

Start with small paragraphs like writing an article for a Newspaper, and proceed from there.

16. John Dodds
Remove as many adjectives as possible. Read Jack Finney’s tale, Cousin Len’s Wonderful Adjective Cellar for a fantastical tale about how a hack becomes a successful author with the help of a magical salt cellar that removes adjectives from his work.

17. John Ireland
I set my writing aside and edit a day or two later with the aim of making it terse. It has trained me to be more conscious of brevity when writing for immediate distribution.

18. Jai
Try to write in simple way. Express your views with most appropriate words.

19. Mark
Read great writers for inspiration. If you read them enough, their excellent writing style will rub off onto your dazzling blog.

YOU ARE what you read (and write!).

20. Caroline
I watch my action tense and wordiness in sentences when I am writing my technical diddley.

For example, in a sentence where you say …”you will have to…” I replace it with “…you must…”, or “Click on the Go button to…” can be replaced with “Click Go to…”.

Think of words such as “enables”, instead of “allows you to” or “helps you to”.

If one word will work where three are, replace it! I always find these, where I slip into conversational as I am writing quickly, then go back and purge, purge, purge.

21. Akhil Tandulwadikar
Don’t shy away from adopting the good habits that other writers use.

Do not worry about the length of the article as long as it conveys the point. Of course, the fewer words you use, the better.

Start the article with a short sentence, not more than 8 words.

22. Julie Martinenza
Instead of adding tags (he said/she said) to every bit of dialogue, learn to identify the speaker by showing him/her in action. Example: “Pass that sweet-smelling turkey this way.” With knife in one hand and fork in the other, Sam looked eager to pounce.

23. Aaron Stroud
Write often and to completion by following a realistic writing schedule.

24. Joanna Young
One that works for me every time is to focus on the positive intention behind my writing. What is it that I want to communicate, express, convey? By focusing on that, by getting into the state that I’m trying to express, I find that I stop worrying about the words – just let them tumble out of their own accord.

It’s a great strategy for beating writer’s block, or overcoming anxiety about a particular piece of writing, whether that’s composing a formal business letter, writing a piece from the heart, or guest blogging somewhere ‘big’…

25. Shelley Rodrigo
Use others writer’s sentences and paragraphs as models and then emulate the syntactic structure with your own content. I’ve learned more about grammar and punctuation that way.

26. Sylvia
Avoid long sentences.

27. Mike Feeney
Learn the difference between me, myself and I. For example: “Contact Bob or myself if you have any questions.” I hear this very often!

28. Richard Scott
When doing a long project, a novel, for instance, shut off your internal editor and just write.

Think of your first draft as a complex outline waiting to be expanded upon, and let the words flow.

29. David
Careful with unnecessary expressions. “At this point in time” came along during the Nixon congressional hearings. Too bad it didn’t go out with him. What about “on a daily basis?”

30. E. I. Sanchez
For large documents, I use Word’s Speech feature to have the computer read the article back. This allows me to catch errors I have missed – especially missing words or words that ’sort of sound the same’ but are spelled differently (e.g. Front me instead of ‘From me’).

31. Cat
Either read the book “Writing Tools 50 Strategies for Every Writer”, by Roy Peter Clark, or read the Fifty Writing Tools: Quick List on his blog. Then join a writing group, or hire a writing coach.

32. Suemagoo
Write the first draft spontaneously. Switch off your internal editor until it is time to review your first draft.

33. Lydia
If you’re writing fiction, it’s a great idea to have a plot. It will coordinate your thoughts and add consistency to the text.

34. Pedro
Edit your older articles and pieces. You will notice that great part of it will be crap, and it will allow you to refine your style and avoid mistakes that you used to make.

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87 Responses to “34 Writing Tips That Will Make You a Better Writer”

  • James Chartrand – Web Content Writer Tips

    Nice collection of tips! Some I agree with, some I don’t, but I think what is important to remember is that each one of us has unique tips and tricks to offer for better writing.

    Two tips:

    Online content writing demands concise business writing. Forget the flowery prose; web content needs more succinct language.

    Drop the passive language. “Is being”, “Is used,” “that is being…” Gone, gone, gone. Outdated. Passé.

    I’ll offer an extra fast tip, as I’ve found it’s one that many people aren’t aware of:

    Word offers a grammar check *and* a style check. If you can work on your writing to the point that you’ve eliminated every green line in your document, you’re that much farther ahead.

  • Daniel Scocco

    James, excellent advice. Shouldn’t expect otherwise from someone with your expertise.

  • Paige Filler

    It would be great to see all of their work as examples of how they apply these tips.

  • Bern Szpilman

    Turning off your monitor for the first draft is a great hack I’ll definitely try next time I write. Actually, I have to make the first draft a golden rule, too often I’m caught up revising my writing in the middle of the process.

    This is great ongoing reference, gotta save it somewhere delicious enough..

  • Akhil Tandulwadikar

    Thank you! Daniel.

  • Wayne Smallman

    Some wonderful ideas — several of which I employ myself, so I must be doing something right!

  • Guy Hogan

    No cliches.

  • Inspirational Editor

    Putting events in chronological order seems like a no-brainer, but but watch out for chronologically challenged sentences that interrupt the flow of your writing. I posted an example of it at today http://www.inspirationaleditor.blogspot.com. 🙂

  • Matt Ellsworth

    Great tips. more authors on our site should heed your advice. It would make for some better quality articles.

  • webhopper

    I am particularly interested in these writing tips as this is one craft I want to improve on. Thank you.

  • imran

    Be a good listener first.As by doing this you will be able to express yourself according to your style very easily.
    And try to learn new words as much as you can

  • Geetha

    To be a good writer, we need to read and also practice writing simple draft letters , get it corrected through someone who has good vocbulary and gramatical knwoledge then correct it, rewrite agin. Weekly twice practice this will make you a perfect writer.

  • skantharuban

    in first ,you suould read lot.when you read ,enjoy every word and every sentence.after that, write lot. when you write ,enjoy everyword and sentence.

  • Rashad

    Thank you for providing these useful tips. I’ve recently searched the internet thoroughly, in search for useful tips. And I must say, this site is one of the most beneficial!

  • Squeaky

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  • Trang

    I think writing a tip a day is a good way for me to improve my E.But i need a friend who help me correct it.When i write something incorrectly, i don’t know why or where it is incorrect.

  • munirhussain

    i want to say about myself. i want to an essay of any topic. but my problem is that i can not write english. sir. if i write an essay of English.

  • Solomon

    I feel I have listened to so many writer’s tips to write well. I’ll try using them from now to sharpen my writing.
    Thanks for the wonderful post!

  • PreciseEdit

    1, Read. Think about what you read. Talk about what you read. Listen to others talking about what they read. Read what they read. (This helps with content.)

    2. Learn the basics of grammar, punctuation, spelling, and usage. Use them. Study them. Pay attention to how well you use them. Study how others use them (or not). (This helps with delivery.)

    3. Get help on the parts you don’t do well, and consider the advice you receive. (This helps you combine join #1 and #2.)

  • PreciseEdit

    Bah.

    “Combine join”

    Oops.

  • elisha

    I could offer 3 words: READ, WRITE, OBSERVE. This will help you write.

  • CraveWorldwide

    These tips are awesome. I am a emerging English writer and speaker and this will help me a lot in improving my writing skills.

    Thanks

  • Minah Jerman

    Much can be said about superfluous words. Meanwhile, please, no more of these: much more better, in order to, in actual fact, needless to say, repeat again? (Need I say more?)

  • taryn

    “I could offer 3 words: READ, WRITE, OBSERVE. This will help you write.”
    Could not have said it better myself

  • Patrique

    When editing a novel, is it wise to do it chapter by chapter? Or do you have to wait until the whole novel is finished and start editing then? I find it rather tedious to edit a long piece of work.

  • Bob Cross

    Dear writers, readers and friends:

    I enjoyed reading the above tips. I value good writing. I enjoy reading for some of the reasons I express below.

    After years of doing research on “how to improve my writing style”, I believe the best book ever written on this topic was authored by Robert Grunning (circa 1935). You might know Grunning invented a numeric way to measure “bad writing” and coined the term the “fog index” to help expose poor style and composition. The “fog index” is a technique that helps an author, an editor or a reader estimate the degree of ambiquity or “fog” in a given article. Once the fog is declouded out of a writing, clarity comes into focus. Like a diamond cut from debris, the message is allowed to sparkle with a more profound, uncanny, splendiferous brillance!!!

    One other point to keep in mind at all time. Ask as yu compose – who will read what I write? With your target reader in mind, express why your message is relevant and important. Place your message in a context that allows your reader to connect in the first sentence. Use words and terms that reveal the value your message will add to the life of your reader. Do this in a refreshing, stimulating way. Avoid using the drab and depressing phraes that are so common in the inferrior views of our rudest critics.

    As you express thoghts, comic relief is always appreciated, well if the person has a impish giggle nerve to tickle. Insight is appreciated by those people who like to read an author resolve one or more of life’s perplexing emotional mysteries. People never tire of having or making more money, saving their time, enjoying better health, being more highly entertained or being delivered from that dreadful sense of boredom that often takes one captive by surprise or by the malicious intent of the people who write books on how to improve your writing style.

    Writers will not argue that writing is the purest form of known communication. Writing supercedes all other forms in its display of knowledge. It allows people to imagine a concept and then employ their intelligence and vivid imaginations to fill in the suggested blanks, or to wrestle the folly out of one’s brain. Writing stimulates the mind; it waters the soul; it feeds the heart; and, it reveals and demolishes our enemy’s ploys like no other form of communication. Writers and readers know how writing can start wars or propose peace. We know this intuitively.

    Good writers create good reading! Good reading comes from good writings. People read what they value. They reject and purge what they view as being boring, or useless, or vain, or disgusting trash!

    A good writer knows what people value, and like, and love! Write something valuable in a way that appeals and penetrates into hearts, minds and souls. People will love you for it!

    Wishing you all better reading from better writing,
    RAC

  • Holly

    Another aspect that a writer should be conscience of, especially young writers, is to write what comes to you. Don’t just abandon an idea because you think it might be shot down by whomever reads it. Write for yourself, as if you’ll be the only one reading it, and you’ll find that your topics and styles are easier to relate to.

  • Alexandra

    I can’t believe you posted that comment from Daniel! He actually talked about the importance of puncutuation but he misused a semi-colon. That should have been a comma!!!

  • san

    great tips on writing….
    when i write i imagine as if i’m speaking to my close friends

  • angela

    nice post! thank you so much…this will definitely help me in my quest for stardom!

  • Rajesh Chaudhary

    I have seen people preferring informal writing and even speaking in times. It might be good in some point of time,for, it save most of our time in writing long sentence. But, the best part of writing formal writing and sticking to it is that, you will know your depth of writing standard.

    Read as much as you can, for, a good writer is a good reader. Try new vocabulary, find its synonyms, and antonyms. use them and try to find difference even between their synonyms.

    Thank you,

  • Chris

    Three more tips:

    Throw away your thesaurus

    Read books you normally wouldn’t read

    Write actively, ditch passivity.

    No one tip will ever work for everyone, what works for some just won’t work for others. Experiment, experiment, experiment.

  • Lisa Raupach

    I’ve been researching my family, and I am finding that there is alot of diffrenties between todays life and what my ancestors have done and I was thinking of writting a book. But I don,t know if there is a market for this kind of book.

  • rana ismil

    It is a wonderful and very useful site not only for me but also for all those who want to become a good writer. I want to become a good teacher of English Language. Please, help and guide me. I will be thankful to you for this favour.

  • Jameel Farooqui

    Compare to reading, writing needs more vocabulary. To become a good writer one needs to be a good reader that improved vocabulary.

  • danielle

    Informative site, thank you. Writing is fun, especially after you corral your internal editor.

    Danielle

  • Zoran

    Great article and great tips. I will make sure to read them more then once and to apply most of them if not all.

    Thanks!

    Regards,

    Zoran

  • Roger C. Parker

    Your blog in general, and this post in particular, are great resources.

    Thank you for sharing such valuable advice. Are you on Twitter?

    Roger

  • Danielle Ingram

    Great points!

    I particularly like number 10, ‘Right click on a word to use the thesaurus. Do it again on the new word and make the best use of your vocabulary.’

    I think it is really important to build up as large a vocabulary as possible, this is a great way to get into the habit!

  • Dr. Boonlert Saisanit, Ph.D.

    I am a Thai Hypnotherapist, if I write I can write about Hypnosis or Hypnotherapy or Meditation. I am now 75 yeqrs old. In fact, I like reading more than writing, but I would like to try writing about my experiences since I was young until now if possible.

    Boonlert Saisanit, Ph.D.

  • Charles Taylor

    Well, to be a better writer, you should pursue the tips found in this blog. To be your own writer, follow the reverence of your mind… conformity, complacency, structure…they are mere pipe dreams of the still born human intellect. Break from that, be audacious. No book or hymn will make you a true writer. No other can truly show you how you should write. And write with a tinge of gravity… write the implacable essence of your soul, whether it be effrontery, or mediocrity.

  • Melvin

    You should take a break for a little while like focus a little on other things then when your done doing those activities ideas will start to flow instead of stressing over what you’re going to write about.

  • Michael Warren

    This type of user generated content is really not a good source for information. There is a good manual called “Tips for Writers”, and some other books such as “The Elements of Style”, that really tell people: how to use punctuation properly, when to use capital letters, sentence structure, grammar, and much more.

  • Mikes

    Avoid cliches, and not just cliched phrases – the way a character reacts could be. If someone offered you a spider, would you recoil in horror? thought not.

  • carrie.nelson1

    i need help with write what this words mean omit needles words

  • carrie.nelson1

    i need help with the discussion on /specific /measurable/ attainable /relevant /time-bound / how do i discussion the words in a statement .

  • carrie.nelson1

    how would i write this words abbreviation please help me please?

  • lee hsieh

    As a teacher, I am trilingual. I coach Chinese, Spanish and English in Latin America.

    Writing is a job I enjoy most. Kindly give me more tips.

    Lee

  • lee hsieh

    Doing translation helps build writing skills.

  • I.P.Adhikari

    The one and only way to be a perfect writer is to:

    Read, Read, Read.
    Write, Write, Write
    Everyday!

  • Kelly

    A good way to get over writer’s block is to just take a break and write something fun, something silly. Just make up a little story with a talking pen, or something unrealistic.

  • syed nadeem pasha s

    the words spoken by mouth that are not taken by back but u can save your words by writing in book so writing makes the human being perfect

  • syed nadeem pasha s

    At some point, you’ll need to let others read your writing. Not just the person who you’re allowing to read it, but the general public. You’ll need to publish your book or short story or poem, or write for a publication. If you’re already doing a blog, that’s good, but if no one reads it, then you need to find a bigger blog and try to submit a guest post. Putting your writing out in the public can be nerve-wracking, but it is a crucial (if painful) part of every writer’s growth. Just do it.

  • James K

    Example of writeing essay story or whatever:

    your typeing your half thought out story and fix and alter it to however it looks best, then BAM you get stuck in the middle of the lame part and it starts going slow

    Solution:

    your typeing your half thought out story and fix and alter it to however it looks best, then Bam u get sluggish and have trouble continueing so you skip ahead to a well thought out part/exiteing/easyer part then after that try connecting the 2 parts together, this helps me
    >>also, if you cant think of the right word but think of one that will work ok but you want something better right click and use the thesaurus on microsoft word (PC)
    or hold the apple button and click on word (MAC)

  • Bri

    Any tips on character development in stories?

  • AH

    Nice. I like this;
    . Bill Harper
    Try not to edit while you’re creating your first draft. Creating and editing are two separate processes using different sides of the brain, and if you try doing both at once you’ll lose. Make a deal with your internal editor that it will get the chance to rip your piece to shreds; it will just need to wait some time.

    A really nice trick is to switch off your monitor when you’re typing. You can’t edit what you can’t see.

  • Alia

    This is a piece of writing I wrote and it is called:Novembers’ Neon Night

    Stumbling occasionally, my skeletal fingers were daggers in my palm whilst the eeriness invaded me. Mercifully, I surrendered to the pitch black arcade of warriors; the moon tracing my every step like a murderer…The trees laughed menacingly at me-the glacial wind gushed in response to my hot humiliation, offering cruel kindness! Regaining strength, I glared viciously at the globe of night, chuckling in sarcasm.
    The battle had commenced. A matter of pride.Glory.Victory…
    Blindingly powerful, a troop of petite stars whisked towards me, huddling in a sphere of illuminating light! Ferocious rage trickled down my spine and, perplexed, I hit reality-this was humane power V dark forces! Droplets of determination assembled in me, my teeth clenched in vengeance and, bracing myself for the worst, I shielded myself in helpless defence! Despair flooded in a river-one that I was drowning in, hanging by a branch-swearing solidly for 2 minutes, I tuned myself out of pitying the nights’ hypnotised soldiers because I was conscious of the alarming fact lurking in the shadows-if I didn’t stop this constant fretting, my ally was going to thrash me. A scene in words, a harsh lesson of life in reality…
    like:

  • Alia

    When writing speech,you can write to convey an accent.e.g.

    I’ve bin wundrin where ya were.This is to convey a Yorkshire accent.

  • Mary

    Want to slow down your editing and proofreading? Try reading aloud what you’ve written starting with your last sentence, then your next to last sentence, and so on until you get to your first sentence.

  • Hannah Jackson

    I think that this really helped me do my English essays and i hope it just as useful to others as it was for me.

    Hannah

  • Chris

    I use friends personality’s in my writing. I am only 15 and I really enjoy writing, I write for my friends who enjoy every new novel I produce. I don’t care if in future my books will be published. But getting back, I am currently writing a war story. I use my friends as characters, not all the characters, but some. I will sometimes give them a situation in the book, and ask them what they would say or do. So I get realistic and different results to the nature of my characters. Try it, I only enjoy writing when I involve others. Writing can be a group activity!

  • Gopalakrishna S R

    Really it is a fantasting contribution to help the persons yearning to write about something they feel and experience in their lives. I read much but hesitate to write about what I think. These tips have instilled courage and determination to start writing. Thank you for enthusing me to venture to write in future without caring any negative criticism. Thank you once again!

  • langlang33

    Often I do not set up on weblogs, but I wish to say that this put up genuinely pressured me to do this! seriously excellent post

  • samuel g wangoto

    Hi.for good advice

    i am just want to enquirer if can help to avoid spelling mistakes when writting a sentence or memo and how to improve my vocabulary

  • muneka

    This is very helpful 🙂 One of the best I’ve seen.
    I’m 16 and am very much hoping to become an English Major but still lacking writing skills. I wish I could do more!

  • Matt Stafford

    Great information. The most important thing of course is just do it. Practice makes perfect

  • Hannah Davis

    I’m sorry to say, but I was excited about reading these pointers. The problem is that the very first one about punctuation had an error right in the comment/tip/pointer. Here it is:

    Daniel
    Pay attention to punctuation, especially to the correct use of commas and periods. These two punctuation marks regulate the flow of your thoughts, and they can make your text confusing even if the words are clear.

    What happened to the comma before the word even? ….can make your text confusing, even if the words are clear.
    How disheartening!

  • Douglas

    Here’s a tip on imagination. If you want to sink deep into your inside (brain’s) imagination, it’s good to start with the outside imagination. I mean, start with something you really appreciate or like very much. It could be a picture, a song, a few words, an object you see, a smell… it can be anything. It will give your mind a platform for creativity to build over and transform something like a photograph into a novel!

  • Gail

    I enjoyed these comments so much. I rarely have the ambition and inspiration to write. Sometimes I have to write just like I have to breathe. I deeply admire anyone who writes on a regular basis. Every criticism I have received in reference to anything I’ve written has helped me immensely. However, I do not have the fortitude to join the ranks of people who call themselves writers, even though I am old enough to have developed a thick skin. Cheers!

  • Selina

    I really love all of these ideas to help others write. They are definitely helping me to improve my skills; I have got into the habit of writing every day and even though I am always quite busy, I have gotten up to nearly 1000 words a day. Thanks for the tips!

  • Nate

    Great tips. I like shutting off the editor of internal voices lol. Lot of neat tips and tricks i have learned greatly from. Awesome stuff

  • Romy singh

    Great writing tips contribution. Thanks to all people’s for sharing their writing tips to make writer’s life easier.

    So here i would like to make my writing suggestion:

    “It’s Not About Being A Best Word Player, It’s All About Being A Better Artist.”

    Never run for mastering writing, because you can’t. Always try to chase your passion, always try to enjoy every copy you write. And devote as much as time you can devote to writing. You’ll able to become a better writer in short while.

    Once again thanks to everybody.

  • Fawad

    The above comment was good to read. I rarely have the ambition and inspiration to write but i have good experience on writing. Sometimes I have to write just like the ugly but I can handle it with my good writing skills, one of the my best writing skills is POSITIVE THINKING.

  • Hamza Javed

    The above comments were good to read. Now i know more about writing a good story then i knew. Sometimes i have to write a confusing one, but i can handle it with my good writing skills.

    Muhammad Hamza Javed

  • maddy

    Don’t over use an explemation mark it doesn’t fit in some peoples writing material.

  • Birungi Berna

    I think i have borrowed a leaf from these writing tips i have always had a passion for writing since my high school only i had become reluctant about it!I now feel i should get back into writing especially after the inspirational tips.

  • Erik van Zadel

    I do not agree with tip 26 (by Sylvia): “Avoid long sentences.” It is a strategy used by many writers nowadays, but should really every sentence be short?

    1) Alternation of short and long sentences gives a variation in rhythm, which is more pleasant to read/ to listen to and helps the listener/reader to stay focused.

    2) Moreover, the exclusive use of short sentences tends to make the message longer. For instance:

    “John turned around. He left the beach. He went home.”

    sounds more tedious and is longer than:

    “John turned around, left the beach and went home.”

    3) Finally, a precise description sometimes demands long(er) sentences. That is why law texts use long sentences a lot.

  • Kasthuri Bai

    Really remarkable tips for the new writers.Thank you. May I add: To impress the readers , a writer can sprinkle humour,direct speech, alliteration,proverbs,maxims and references to popular persons,books,etc. relevantly.

  • Bill

    What I like most about these tips is that they’re honest enough to advise emulating other writers. What I don’t see enough of is recommending careful editing on a mechanical level and getting others to read your copy to weed out small mistakes. As it says elsewhere on this site, those little things can make a writer look unprofessional. Amit Goyal, for example (tip #15) says to write “everyday,” when he surely meant “every day.” James Chartland, who wrote the first comment, should have used “further” where he used “farther.” I know too well how embarrassing it is to do things like this, and I certainly don’t mean to imply I never do. I’ve made mistakes so mortifying I wouldn’t tell strangers about them in an anonymous online forum.

  • Darius Archer

    A lot of good writing tips here! But since I’ve noticed that there isn’t much on writer’s block …

    When you have writer’s block:
    — It might be because you’ve been sitting at the computer for too long, trying to write your daily quota. In this case, give yourself and your mind a break. Go out for a jog, or just sit outside soaking up the breeze and fresh air. Personally, for me it helps if I go take a shower and come back to it.
    — Another possibility is that the block is a result of your mind growing bored with your story. This happens when you have everything planned out too rigidly, and nothing new (to yourself) is occurring or going to occur. When this happens, try adding a plot twist, a new character, or a new danger. You could develop and change aspects of your world or existing characters, and focus more on really making them three dimensional.
    Doing this does not mean that you have to change everything that happens in your planned story, it just means letting things go off on a slight tangent.

  • Jacob

    Those are great points, Darius. Often the best thing one can do for his writing is to simply stop writing for a bit. Ernest Hemingway wrote:

    “I learned never to empty the well of my writing, but always to stop when there was still something there in the deep part of the well, and let it refill at night from the springs that fed it.”

    I find the advice of never letting our “well” of ideas and motivation for writing completely empty. It is difficult to do, especially with deadlines, but it is often best to stop writing for the day before you totally wear out your mind.

  • Andrew Evans

    Daniel

    I haven’t read many of the posts yet: my eye was caught by the first entry. Is the comma after ‘punctuation’ correct? It looks to me that either it shouldn’t be there, or it should be accompanied by a conjunction i.e.

    Pay attention to punctuation especially to the correct use of commas and periods.

    or…

    Pay attention to punctuation, and especially to the correct use of commas and periods.

    Regards,

    Andy
    Mathematics Teacher

  • Harley Harmon

    I’d like to talk about good writing. In my journey through life as a technical writer, I’ve pretty much always believed there’s no such a thing as “good writing”. There’s only good rewriting. When you start to write your composition, hopefully following an outline you previously composed, go back after you’ve written several pages of text, and read it. Then edit it for grammar and typing errors with a pencil. Now is the time to rewrite what you first wrote as a rough draft, and submit it as your final essay.

  • Hemu

    Actually, I do not agree with your last point, #Pedro, Because editing your older content is not going to worth. Your older drafts is part of your writing journey, this shows you how you have been evolved as a writer. No one told Shakespeare to write comedies, and the switch to tragedies. Your older drafts are image of your evolution. So don’t edit them.

  • Darien Skyler

    To be a good writer, one of the greatest things you can do is try and convert any verb “to be” in any of its tenses to other verbs that correspond to your sentence(s).
    The paragraph above in a corrected format:
    Becoming a good writer requires converting any version of the verb “to be” into another verb that corresponds to your sentence(s).

    Changing the verb “to be” also helps refine the sentences. One of the greatest lessons in English involves not using the verb “to be”. It forces the usage of proper words that may require expanding your vocabulary.

  • Jerry Murbach

    Shelley Rodrigo (tip #25) just could NOT have written the second and third words as shown. Either this is a misprint or a humorous red herring.

  • Analisis Clinicos

    Really remarkable tips for the new writers.Thank you. May I add: To impress the readers , a writer can sprinkle humour,direct speech, alliteration,proverbs,maxims and references to popular persons,books,etc. relevantly.

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