3 Reasons to Ditch Your Novel’s Prologue

The prologue is a legitimate story-telling device, but many readers admit that when they see the word “Prologue,” they skip at once to the page that begins with the words “Chapter One.”

Sometimes a prologue is the ideal way to present information essential to the reader’s understanding of the story.

Mystery writers, for example, often begin with a prologue written from the killer’s point of view, or perhaps that of the killer’s first victim. On the other hand, such a scene can be written as “Chapter One” as Martha Grimes does it in The Dirty Duck.

Writers of historical fiction may wish to provide background information to orient the reader in an unfamiliar period.

Writers of fantasy or sci-fi may write a prologue to equip the reader with unfamiliar assumptions held by the inhabitants of the strange world they’re about to enter.

Too often, however, what some writers call a “prologue” is undigested back story, mere scene-setting, or what should be Chapter One.

Ditch your prologue if…
1. …it seems boring even to you and you can hardly wait to get to Chapter One.

2. …it’s a lengthy narrative of back story that could more effectively be doled out in small bits as the story progresses.

3. …all it does is create atmosphere without having much to do with the story.

Reconsider that Prologue
“Prologues and Epilogues”

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6 Responses to “3 Reasons to Ditch Your Novel’s Prologue”

  1. sudharm baxi on February 26, 2009 2:48 pm

    Fantastic post!!

    Prologues certainly are very important for novels based on some past time or some research work.

    But many a times authors write so bad prologues that it actually kill the mood of the reader.

    I love the crisp prologues of Dan Brown in all his novels, they create a zeal to actually hold the novel tighter, creating that panic, that excitement which shouts – Hey!! something fantastic coming your way be prepared!!

  2. Deborah on February 26, 2009 2:57 pm

    Short prologues are fine. Long prologues—more than 300 words—no.

  3. Johnica Davis on April 28, 2009 5:54 pm

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  4. Johnica Davis on April 28, 2009 5:56 pm

    yor witing is awsom.

  5. Sarah on June 11, 2009 11:43 am

    touche.

  6. alice on July 21, 2009 2:15 pm

    I’ve seen prologues that work really well, but most of the books I read, the prologue will be the hook and chapter one is… background info.

    it’s a way to hook the reader when you know your beginning is going to be a little rough – if done incorrectly.

    don’t get me wrong, i’ve seen prologues that work so well. but there are those few…

    anywho, this article brings up great points. glad I read it!

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