Redundancy Exercise (59)

Each of the sentences below contains a redundancy. Revise each sentence to eliminate repetition.

Answers and Explanations

1.
Original: They reached a consensus of opinion on the matter.
Correct : They reached consensus on the matter.

2.
Original: We reluctantly collaborated together on the project.
Correct : We reluctantly collaborated on the project.

3.
Original: Next time, she will be more careful about advance planning for the event.
Correct : Next time, she will be more careful about planning for the event.

4.
Original: He tapped his pencil on the table throughout the entire meeting.
Correct : He tapped his pencil on the table throughout the meeting.

5.
Original: As soon as I entered the chamber, I found myself surrounded on all sides.
Correct : As soon as I entered the chamber, I found myself surrounded.

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