In each of the following sentences, punctuation associated with a quoted phrase or a partial or full quotation is not appropriate. Discussion after each example explains why the punctuation should either be changed or omitted altogether, and one or more revisions illustrate correct treatment of the quoted material.
1. The old saying, “What gets rewarded gets done,” is as true with risk management as with any other business process.
The phrase “the old saying” should not be treated restrictively—“What gets rewarded gets done” is not the only old saying; it is being described as an old saying—so omit punctuation between the phrase and the saying itself: “The old saying ‘What gets rewarded gets done’ is as true with risk management as with any other business process.”
2. The company responded in a statement Friday that the newspaper article showed, “a complete disregard for basic journalistic standards.”
Because the partial quotation complements the attribution to complete a sentence that requires no internal punctuation, do not use such punctuation to separate the attribution and the quotation: “The company responded in a statement Friday that the newspaper article showed ‘a complete disregard for basic journalistic standards.’”
3. “I would like to do a college fund for him, it’s not the kid’s fault,” he said.
Regardless of whether such a sentence is a quotation or not, the use of a mere comma to separate two independence clauses without the support of a conjunction is incorrect: “’I would like to do a college fund for him; it’s not the kid’s fault,’ he said.”
However, using a semicolon in a quotation has always seemed stiffly formal to me; simply as a personal preference, I would use a more dashing punctuation mark: “’I would like to do a college fund for him—it’s not the kid’s fault,’ he said.” Another alternative is to insert the attribution between the two clauses, treating them as separate sentences: “‘I would like to do a college fund for him,’ he said. ‘It’s not the kid’s fault.’”
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Treating two independent clauses as separate sentences is a SUPERB idea: “‘I would like to do a college fund for him,’ he said. ‘It’s not the [youngster]’s fault.’” Such writers and speakers as Bertrand Russell, Winston Churchill, Ernest Hemingway, Jean-Paul Sartre, and Bob Dylan would agree – Nobel Prize winners, all of them.
Frédéric Mistral of France won the Prize in 1904;
Gabriela Mistral of Chile won the Prize in 1945;
The American novelist Judith Krantz published her novel “Mistral’s Daughter” in 1982:
I don’t think that any of these Mistral’s had anything to do with one another, and in fact “Gabriela Mistral” was the pseudonym of Lucila Godoy Alcayaga, who was born in Chile of Chilean parents.
Hence, she was not French at all, and none of these people seem to have anything to do with the cold mistral winds of the northeastern Mediterranean: wind)