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Up Style and Down Style

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Book titles–and newspaper and magazine headlines–are usually formatted in one of two styles: “up style” and “down style.”

Up Style
This style calls for capitalizing the first and last words in the title or headline and all “major words” in the title.

Not all style guides agree as to what should be considered a major word.

Most agree that nouns, pronouns, adjectives, verbs, adverbs, and subordinating conjunctions (if, because, as, that, etc.) are major words and should always be capitalized. That leaves articles (a, an, the), prepositions, and coordinating conjunctions (and, but, or, for, nor) in the minor league where lowercase prevails. Unfortunately, as is frequent with arbitrary rules, style guides don’t always agree.

Both the Chicago Manual of Style and the AP Stylebook agree that articles (a, an, the), and coordinating conjunctions (and, but, or, for, nor) should not be capitalized unless they are the first or last word of the title, but when it comes to prepositions, they differ.

CMOS says never capitalize a preposition unless it is the first word in the title. AP says leave short prepositions in lowercase, but capitalize prepositions and conjunctions of four or more letters.

Here is how the same title would be formatted according to CMOS and AP:

CMOS: Four Theories concerning the Gospel according to Matthew

AP: Four Theories Concerning the Gospel According to Matthew

Most stylebooks state that all verbs are capitalized, including is, am, and be, but that the to of an infinitive is to be treated like a preposition and put in lowercase: How to Train Your Dragon, How to Be a Better Parent.

Down Style
The only words capitalized in down style are the first word of the title and any proper nouns that appear in the title:

Four theories concerning the Gospel according to Matthew. (book title)

Coastal Commission enters fray over San Mateo County beach access (headline)

Down style has been adopted by many newspapers because it calls for fewer rules.

The purpose of having style guides is to make reading pleasant by providing a clear, consistent manner of presenting written material. If you write for yourself, adopt any style you wish for your blog or other publications. If you write for hire, follow your employer’s house style.

The following headlines and book titles taken at random from the Web illustrate the fact that not everyone follows the same stylebook:

Journey Home Finally Begins for the Victims of Malaysia Airlines Flight (headline, NYTimes)

Why Triumphant Jihadis In Iraq Will Help Assad Crush Opposition In Aleppo (headline, HuffPost)

Modern Identity Changer: How To Create And Use A New Identity For Privacy And Personal Freedom (book listed on Amazon)

Gone With The Wind (AMC filmsite.org)

Gone with the Wind (Imdb)

Gone With the Wind (Rotten Tomatoes)

Hardball: How Politics Is Played, Told by One Who Knows the Game (book listed on Amazon)

How To Hide Anything (book listed on Amazon)

Why Government Fails So Often: And How It Can Do Better (book listed on Amazon)

I’ll save the question of “Italics or Quotation Marks?” for another post on book titles.

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6 thoughts on “Up Style and Down Style”

  1. Good post. Very useful.

    You mentioned italics in your teaser at the end. I have adopted a practice of using single quotes to set off words that would otherwise be italicized. For example, if I were discussing my use of the word ‘italicized’ in the previous sentence, as contrasted with quoting it.

    Is this an acceptable practice? And if so, does punctuation, American-style, still go within the single quote?

  2. About Up style, I’ll go with AP Stylebook. It seems more consistent to me. What do you think about that?

  3. John,
    I agree. A word as long as “according” in lower case in a title looks odd to me. On the other hand, capitalizing “is” also looks odd to me because it’s so short, but all the guides I’ve consulted agree that it should be capitalized because it is a verb. And then there’s the infinitive. Doesn’t seem fair that “is” gets a capital and “to” doesn’t when it’s part of a verb form!

    BUT, rules are rules; when it comes to mechanical style, one mustn’t look for justice.

  4. The best and simplest solution is always to capitalise EVERY SINGLE word in a title, as in “Gone With The Wind”.
    What to call it ? CORRECT STYLE !

  5. Every beginning copyeditor or blogger should print this sentence out and read it as needed:
    The purpose of having style guides is to make reading pleasant by providing a clear, consistent manner of presenting written material. If you write for yourself, adopt any style you wish for your blog or other publications. If you write for hire, follow your employer’s house style.

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