Comments on: The Inverted Pyramid http://www.dailywritingtips.com/the-inverted-pyramid/ Wed, 08 Feb 2012 18:41:25 +0000 hourly 1 By: d-god gift http://www.dailywritingtips.com/the-inverted-pyramid/comment-page-1/#comment-387528 d-god gift Mon, 23 May 2011 21:47:13 +0000 http://www.dailywritingtips.com/the-inverted-pyramid/#comment-387528 I m doing journalism and I think this information will help me and get to know more what I have learn in class. I m doing journalism and I think this information will help me and get to know more what I have learn in class.

]]> By: ahmet nurlu http://www.dailywritingtips.com/the-inverted-pyramid/comment-page-1/#comment-329040 ahmet nurlu Sun, 31 Oct 2010 15:45:08 +0000 http://www.dailywritingtips.com/the-inverted-pyramid/#comment-329040 Although I agree it, the top of the pyramid is the title of report, which conveys the main point of essay. I often see the reports' title from which you can't guess the what the writer want to say. Sometimes it is the opposite, the author writes someting in an article irrelevant to the title. Although I agree it, the top of the pyramid is the title of report, which conveys the main point of essay. I often see the reports’ title from which you can’t guess the what the writer want to say. Sometimes it is the opposite, the author writes someting in an article irrelevant to the title.

]]> By: Uh http://www.dailywritingtips.com/the-inverted-pyramid/comment-page-1/#comment-323895 Uh Thu, 14 Oct 2010 19:36:03 +0000 http://www.dailywritingtips.com/the-inverted-pyramid/#comment-323895 Uh what is this? "It was developed by journalists for reasons that are completely irrelevant today… or are they?" Question writing, especially in the lead, is also frowned on in journalistic writing. It's viewed as a weak attempt to pass through to the next point in a story. Yours sounds slightly snarky and rude too. Everything else sounds great. Uh what is this?

“It was developed by journalists for reasons that are completely irrelevant today… or are they?”

Question writing, especially in the lead, is also frowned on in journalistic writing. It’s viewed as a weak attempt to pass through to the next point in a story. Yours sounds slightly snarky and rude too.

Everything else sounds great.

]]> By: sabah http://www.dailywritingtips.com/the-inverted-pyramid/comment-page-1/#comment-309433 sabah Fri, 20 Aug 2010 17:20:57 +0000 http://www.dailywritingtips.com/the-inverted-pyramid/#comment-309433 this was surely informative. this was surely informative.

]]> By: Julie Bartholomew http://www.dailywritingtips.com/the-inverted-pyramid/comment-page-1/#comment-287816 Julie Bartholomew Mon, 14 Jun 2010 01:32:56 +0000 http://www.dailywritingtips.com/the-inverted-pyramid/#comment-287816 Journalism - writing about a fatal accident Journalism – writing about a fatal accident

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