Comments on: Subordinate Clauses and Commas http://www.dailywritingtips.com/subordinate-clauses-and-commas/ Thu, 09 Feb 2012 13:06:58 +0000 hourly 1 By: Manbe http://www.dailywritingtips.com/subordinate-clauses-and-commas/comment-page-1/#comment-383042 Manbe Fri, 22 Apr 2011 21:45:56 +0000 http://www.dailywritingtips.com/?p=3794#comment-383042 Could you please give me some insights in understanding of the correctness of the following sentences? Thanks. 1. I would like to have the privilege of having access to your valuable knowledge and expertise as a mentor, to assist me as a mentee, to start building a network with a view to obtaining employment in a post-secondary educational institution. 2. I would like to have the privilege of having access to your valuable knowledge and expertise as a mentor, to assist me as a mentee, in starting to build a network with a view to obtaining employment in a post-secondary educational institution. 3. I would like to have the privilege of having access to your valuable knowledge and expertise as a mentor, to assist me as a mentee, in start building a network with a view to obtain employment in a post-secondary educational institution. 4. I would like to have the privilege of having access to your valuable knowledge and expertise as a mentor, to assist me as a mentee, in start building a network with a view to obtaining employment in a post-secondary educational institution. Could you please give me some insights in understanding of the correctness of the following sentences? Thanks.

1. I would like to have the privilege of having access to your valuable knowledge and expertise as a mentor, to assist me as a mentee, to start building a network with a view to obtaining employment in a post-secondary educational institution.

2. I would like to have the privilege of having access to your valuable knowledge and expertise as a mentor, to assist me as a mentee, in starting to build a network with a view to obtaining employment in a post-secondary educational institution.

3. I would like to have the privilege of having access to your valuable knowledge and expertise as a mentor, to assist me as a mentee, in start building a network with a view to obtain employment in a post-secondary educational institution.

4. I would like to have the privilege of having access to your valuable knowledge and expertise as a mentor, to assist me as a mentee, in start building a network with a view to obtaining employment in a post-secondary educational institution.

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