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		<title>By: LO FORTUGALEZA</title>
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		<dc:creator>LO FORTUGALEZA</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 10 Jun 2009 14:30:55 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Hi everyone!  

As a professional who has been teaching others to write business correspondence for the past ten years, I feel more confident signing off letters or memos that are made up of sentences written in the active voice.  Sentences written in the active voice are far more helpful in helping readers to visualize what the writer is trying to say; hence, they promote faster understanding.

Using sentences written in the passive voice gives me a feeling that what I signed off is something I cannot stand by, assert for, and at worst, fight for.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hi everyone!  </p>
<p>As a professional who has been teaching others to write business correspondence for the past ten years, I feel more confident signing off letters or memos that are made up of sentences written in the active voice.  Sentences written in the active voice are far more helpful in helping readers to visualize what the writer is trying to say; hence, they promote faster understanding.</p>
<p>Using sentences written in the passive voice gives me a feeling that what I signed off is something I cannot stand by, assert for, and at worst, fight for.</p>
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		<title>By: Grace Eom</title>
		<link>http://www.dailywritingtips.com/passive-writing/comment-page-1/#comment-95725</link>
		<dc:creator>Grace Eom</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 13 Mar 2009 10:38:22 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>interesting, interested.
I wonder this difference.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>interesting, interested.<br />
I wonder this difference.</p>
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		<title>By: Ches</title>
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		<dc:creator>Ches</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 25 Jan 2009 16:27:48 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Could you please tell me which one is better:

Food is something to eat. or
Food is something to be eaten.

Thanks</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Could you please tell me which one is better:</p>
<p>Food is something to eat. or<br />
Food is something to be eaten.</p>
<p>Thanks</p>
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		<title>By: adizitsky</title>
		<link>http://www.dailywritingtips.com/passive-writing/comment-page-1/#comment-70522</link>
		<dc:creator>adizitsky</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 13 Jan 2009 01:23:54 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>i just still crazy with those two...!!!!
would u like to give more examples...!!!!
in sentences, better..!!!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>i just still crazy with those two&#8230;!!!!<br />
would u like to give more examples&#8230;!!!!<br />
in sentences, better..!!!</p>
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		<title>By: PreciseEdit</title>
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		<dc:creator>PreciseEdit</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 13 Jun 2008 20:01:26 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Ron: The passive of the sentence should be &quot;The ball was hit by John.&quot; Your example is the passive form of &quot;The ball hit John.&quot;

Usually, with a little thinking, most sentences can be converted from passive to active. In the above example, &quot;Further research needs to be done to prove this hypothesis,&quot; could be worded as &quot;Future research will confirm or reject this hypothesis,&quot; or &quot;This hypothesis needs further examination.&quot; &quot;This hypothesis will be proved through future research.&quot; (Note: no self-respecting scientist would write the original sentence since hypothesis are not &quot;proved&quot; nor can a person claim that a hypothesis will be proved.)</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Ron: The passive of the sentence should be &#8220;The ball was hit by John.&#8221; Your example is the passive form of &#8220;The ball hit John.&#8221;</p>
<p>Usually, with a little thinking, most sentences can be converted from passive to active. In the above example, &#8220;Further research needs to be done to prove this hypothesis,&#8221; could be worded as &#8220;Future research will confirm or reject this hypothesis,&#8221; or &#8220;This hypothesis needs further examination.&#8221; &#8220;This hypothesis will be proved through future research.&#8221; (Note: no self-respecting scientist would write the original sentence since hypothesis are not &#8220;proved&#8221; nor can a person claim that a hypothesis will be proved.)</p>
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