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kobrien
05-08-2008, 05:43 PM
Would the following question take a question mark and if so, where?

Why would I not want to be a doctor like I planned to be, my mother wanted to know.

susabelle
05-08-2008, 08:10 PM
No, because it is more of a statement, than a question.

That's probably why you're having trouble figuring out where to put the question mark.

Vismay
05-09-2008, 10:19 AM
Maybe it could be "Why would I not want to be a doctor, like I planned to be? My mother wanted to know."
I am not sure.
Cheers!!

Ali
05-12-2008, 09:48 PM
It doesn't need a question mark, but the structure seems a bit confusing. Perhaps rewrite it as:

My mother wanted to know why I no longer wanted to be a doctor, as I'd once planned to be.

Ali

DanielScocco
05-13-2008, 10:40 AM
No question mark needed, but I agree with Ali that the structure is confusing.

I like her example better also.

QuillingQuillQuiller
05-17-2008, 04:35 AM
*Why would I not want to be a doctor like I planned to be, my mother wanted to know.

It is a statement and not a question.
Why would I not ... / Why wouldn't I ... (?)
Why I would not ... (.)

Why wouldn't you become a doctor? (?)
Why would you not become a doctor? (?)
My mother asked me why I wouldn't become a doctor. (.)
I told her the reason why I wouldn't become a doctor is because it would cost a lot of money. (.)

*Why I would not want to be a doctor like I planned to be, my mother wanted to know.
It's not wrong, how about using become. I prefer it as brief as possible. Just a suggestion.

*Why I would not want to be a doctor like I planned to be, my mother wanted to know.
It's not wrong either, how about using before. Another suggestion again.

*Why I would not want to be a doctor like I planned to be, my mother wanted to know.
Years back, a writer ever told me to avoid building a statement that begins with a comma clause. Your statement did. How about rotate "my mother wanted to know" to the front.

My mother wanted to know why I would not want to be a doctor like I planned to be.

A finest polished statement without a single comma is attached.
-or- according to my suggestion:

My mother wanted to know why I would not become a doctor like I had planned before.

Best regards,

Budi