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	<title>Comments on: Can &#8220;Enclosure&#8221; go at the top of a letter?</title>
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		<title>By: Cassie Tuttle</title>
		<link>http://www.dailywritingtips.com/can-enclosure-go-at-the-top-of-a-letter/comment-page-1/#comment-121921</link>
		<dc:creator>Cassie Tuttle</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 22 May 2009 18:39:21 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Peter,

I&#039;d have to say that there really is no &quot;standard&quot; format that is always used by everyone in the U.S. who writes a business letter.  And of course, when using business stationery that already includes company name, address, etc., the writer&#039;s return address is not necessary (but the date still is).  

Some people line up everything along the left margin.  Personally, I like to line up the date (and closing) so that they start in the center of the page.

As far as Bonnie&#039;s comment about &quot;always&quot; using a colon after the salutation, there is an exception (--- of course: it&#039;s English!).  It is acceptable to use a comma instead of a colon if the business letter is &quot;informal&quot; and if the writer and addressee are &quot;friendly.&quot;

For example --

&lt;b&gt;Dear Mr. Smith:&lt;/b&gt; (formal and common in business writing)
         or
&lt;b&gt;Dear Ed,&lt;/b&gt; (informal and sometimes appropriate)

At least, that&#039;s been my experience.  :-)</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Peter,</p>
<p>I&#8217;d have to say that there really is no &#8220;standard&#8221; format that is always used by everyone in the U.S. who writes a business letter.  And of course, when using business stationery that already includes company name, address, etc., the writer&#8217;s return address is not necessary (but the date still is).  </p>
<p>Some people line up everything along the left margin.  Personally, I like to line up the date (and closing) so that they start in the center of the page.</p>
<p>As far as Bonnie&#8217;s comment about &#8220;always&#8221; using a colon after the salutation, there is an exception (&#8212; of course: it&#8217;s English!).  It is acceptable to use a comma instead of a colon if the business letter is &#8220;informal&#8221; and if the writer and addressee are &#8220;friendly.&#8221;</p>
<p>For example &#8211;</p>
<p><b>Dear Mr. Smith:</b> (formal and common in business writing)<br />
         or<br />
<b>Dear Ed,</b> (informal and sometimes appropriate)</p>
<p>At least, that&#8217;s been my experience.  <img src='http://www.dailywritingtips.com/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_smile.gif' alt=':-)' class='wp-smiley' /> </p>
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		<title>By: Bonnie</title>
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		<dc:creator>Bonnie</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 21 May 2009 17:43:51 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>It is absolutely the standard in the U.S. when writing a business letter to use a colon after the salutation. Always!

As well it is standard practice for business letters in the U.S. to be laid out using &quot;full block&quot; format. Using this format, the entire letter is left justified in the order that Cassie suggests. This is the only format I ever use for business writing.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>It is absolutely the standard in the U.S. when writing a business letter to use a colon after the salutation. Always!</p>
<p>As well it is standard practice for business letters in the U.S. to be laid out using &#8220;full block&#8221; format. Using this format, the entire letter is left justified in the order that Cassie suggests. This is the only format I ever use for business writing.</p>
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		<title>By: Peter</title>
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		<dc:creator>Peter</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 11 Mar 2009 02:04:06 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Is that standard in the US?

The writer&#039;s address and date should go on the right and the recipient&#039;s address on the left, side-by-side (old style rules normally put the writer&#039;s address higher on the page, and the date lower than the recipient&#039;s address, to avoid having to type two columns on a manual typewriter - not a problem nowadays; the recipients address should of course be aligned to fit in the window if using windowed envelopes).  I can&#039;t imagine any circumstance in which it would appropriate to use a colon after the salutation...?</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Is that standard in the US?</p>
<p>The writer&#8217;s address and date should go on the right and the recipient&#8217;s address on the left, side-by-side (old style rules normally put the writer&#8217;s address higher on the page, and the date lower than the recipient&#8217;s address, to avoid having to type two columns on a manual typewriter &#8211; not a problem nowadays; the recipients address should of course be aligned to fit in the window if using windowed envelopes).  I can&#8217;t imagine any circumstance in which it would appropriate to use a colon after the salutation&#8230;?</p>
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		<title>By: Cassie Tuttle</title>
		<link>http://www.dailywritingtips.com/can-enclosure-go-at-the-top-of-a-letter/comment-page-1/#comment-94572</link>
		<dc:creator>Cassie Tuttle</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 10 Mar 2009 20:19:44 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I spent a summer (many years ago) attending secretarial classes -- and, boy, am I glad I did!

I agree:  The &quot;enclosure&quot; line goes at the bottom of the letter.

I learned a slightly different method, though, for formatting correspondence.

1. writer’s return address
2. date the letter is being written
3. name, title, and address of recipient
4. a RE or subject line if desired
5. salutation (with colon or comma, depending on relationship)
6. body of the letter
7. closing and signature
8. initials of typist*
9. notice of enclosure (if any); item(s) enclosed/attached may or may not be spelled out.  I do not underline &quot;Enc.&quot;
10. notice of cc and bcc (if any)

* randomjohn mentioned including the author&#039;s initials with the typist&#039;s initials.  I learned to just note the typist&#039;s initials; however, if you want to include both, it would be: &quot;RQJ:mfs&quot; (author first).</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I spent a summer (many years ago) attending secretarial classes &#8212; and, boy, am I glad I did!</p>
<p>I agree:  The &#8220;enclosure&#8221; line goes at the bottom of the letter.</p>
<p>I learned a slightly different method, though, for formatting correspondence.</p>
<p>1. writer’s return address<br />
2. date the letter is being written<br />
3. name, title, and address of recipient<br />
4. a RE or subject line if desired<br />
5. salutation (with colon or comma, depending on relationship)<br />
6. body of the letter<br />
7. closing and signature<br />
8. initials of typist*<br />
9. notice of enclosure (if any); item(s) enclosed/attached may or may not be spelled out.  I do not underline &#8220;Enc.&#8221;<br />
10. notice of cc and bcc (if any)</p>
<p>* randomjohn mentioned including the author&#8217;s initials with the typist&#8217;s initials.  I learned to just note the typist&#8217;s initials; however, if you want to include both, it would be: &#8220;RQJ:mfs&#8221; (author first).</p>
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		<title>By: David</title>
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		<dc:creator>David</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 10 Mar 2009 16:45:39 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I welcome breaking convention. Look at it from the point of view of &#039;is this practical and helpful to the reader&#039;. For me - I would welcome an inventory of contents at both the beginning and ending of letters. If nothing else a top &amp; tail inventory serves to confirm the contents.

In the invoicing business , bills of shipping etc - you can never be told what is enclosed too many times. 

I saw a great sign on a shop in London the other day. One shop said &quot;Established 1869&quot; - the shop next door read &quot; We&#039;re Never Established!!&quot; - that&#039;s funky!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I welcome breaking convention. Look at it from the point of view of &#8216;is this practical and helpful to the reader&#8217;. For me &#8211; I would welcome an inventory of contents at both the beginning and ending of letters. If nothing else a top &amp; tail inventory serves to confirm the contents.</p>
<p>In the invoicing business , bills of shipping etc &#8211; you can never be told what is enclosed too many times. </p>
<p>I saw a great sign on a shop in London the other day. One shop said &#8220;Established 1869&#8243; &#8211; the shop next door read &#8221; We&#8217;re Never Established!!&#8221; &#8211; that&#8217;s funky!</p>
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